Today I had to finish of my snot writing. We got to play with it and learn about it before we had to write about it.
I love creating a writing about this.
Here is my work.
Snot Writing
It was really gooey and mushy.
It looked yuck and slimy.
It looked like it was going to be sticky but it was really slimy.
It looked like from my point that it was going to spread.
It looked like it had yellow spots and very lumpy.
Then I got to smell the yuck green stuff.
It smelt like strawberry soap and lovely shampoo.
At the start I thought it would smell like ooze and yucky stuff but no.
It felt really gooey and slimy once I touched it.
It felt like oil and butter.
And It felt like the fun was just about to begin.
It feels really weird like sticky things stuck to the ground.
It sounded like popping and goopy sound.
It sounded like bubbly and slapping noses.
Inside of me i was really attracted to it.
But i was weird how the SNOT stained my hands.
This was fun to do. Mostly fun to play with it.
Wow! Brianna I really like how you described how you felt and not just what the snot felt like. Next time maybe you could think of a sentence starter that would hook the reader in. When I did that with the snot I really enjoyed it. I totally agree with the part when you said it stained your hands!
ReplyDeleteI remember doing that in my writing class . I like how you said "At the start I thought it would smell like ooze and yucky stuff but it did not. Maybe next you can make you own snot man and you can come check mine out.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Brianna love it I love how you have put so much adjectives and wow words maybe next time you could think of another sentence starter because you just used the same sentence starter but other then that Love it keep up the great work.
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