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Saturday 18 April 2020

creative writing

we got the choice if we wanted to do a creative story or not, I decided to go onto pobble and writing a story about the picture.

Trapped
His eyes blinked. They were the only part of his body that he could move, he was stuck in ice   and had been for some time. The person that had put him there was far gone by now.
Glancing around in desperation he tried to move his aching body, but it was no good, there didn’t seem to be a way out. Time was slipping away… He had to escape. If he didn’t, then darkness would cover the world…
He started moving his fingers and his body, he thought he was just slowly dying.. But really he was gaining powers. The ice started to melt and he started to feel more free. Finally all the ice was melted and he was able to pull himself free from the frozen lake.  
The challenge was now on to find the person that first put him in the frozen lake. He saw something in the snow in the corner of his eye he glazed at the ground for awhile trying to find out what it was and realised that it was actaully foot prints, he decided to start following the foot prints through the snow. Well he was walking through the snow everytime he took a step the snow would melt and turned back into the bright green forest. 
He slowly lifted his head and gazed into the distance and noticed something strange happening to him.. His heart started to race, his body started to heat up and his legs started moving faster. He began to realise he was starting to run. He came to a sudden stop and turned aroud and looked back behind him and eveything in the forest was bright green and beautfuil. He felt a sudden shiver down his spine as something went racing past him. It was a man in a black coat turning everything into ice. As his eye ajusted to what he was seeing, he realised that it was a battle against summer verse winter. He realised this was the man who put him in the frozen lake. 
He saw something coming towards him in the corner of his eye. It was a big white ball coming towards him, he started to heat up and turned around and put his hands out and a ball of fire went blasting towards the man in the black coat. The battle went on and on back and forward towards each other, the man thought he was going to die as he was started to get very tried of not knowing how to control his powers he just gained. He did one blast back at the man before get was exhausted and feel to the ground, he won the battle and the man disappared into the distance and eveything turned into a summer forest. 

The flowers started to spring, the birds started to sing as he realised he now needs to work on his powers as he knows it will not be the last time he see’s the man in the black coat.

1 comment:

  1. Wow, awesome story Brianna! I loved reading this, it was so engaging. You used lots of descriptive words and you showed that you have a great vocabulary. Is there a way to stop the words going off the page?

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