Good effort on your blog post. I see that you've listed down two differences between your house and a wharepuni. With your differences, you've written down the list of differences with the modern house but what are the differences in a wharepuni? I'm also curious to know, could you explain to me further about the similarities? How are the roof, floors and windows similar? Maybe insert an image of a wharepuni and a modern house to explain your answer! It will help the readers of your blog post understand what your comparing! :)
Looking forward to hearing from you Brianna and keep up the good work!
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Hi there Brianna,
ReplyDeleteGood effort on your blog post. I see that you've listed down two differences between your house and a wharepuni. With your differences, you've written down the list of differences with the modern house but what are the differences in a wharepuni? I'm also curious to know, could you explain to me further about the similarities? How are the roof, floors and windows similar? Maybe insert an image of a wharepuni and a modern house to explain your answer! It will help the readers of your blog post understand what your comparing! :)
Looking forward to hearing from you Brianna and keep up the good work!
Cheers,
Jade F :)